Could somebody please help me with this?
It’s part of a speech
But in the end, nothing is free. Credit card merchants must pay the card companies 3% of their sales conducted with credit cards. And card companies don’t want retailers to charge card holders extra money to offset their costs, as it might discourage the use of their credit cards. Altogether, this begs the question, So, why do merchants accept credit cards in the first place if they have to pay? The answer is simple: because people spend more when they use credit cards. In fact, research shows that people who use credit cards spend 23% more than cash customers. Having to give 3 percent of their profits to the card companies is nothing in comparison to the significant extra dollars a credit card holder spends.
I know this is confusing so could you please edit this for me? thanks! I don’t know how to make it less confusing and fun. Any suggestions welcome!
If you wrote this speech, it sounds great. What is the age group you will be presenting this to? If it is to age 13 and under, you may want to Spark notes it. Otherwise, keep it as is. You were succinct and to the point. (You could always show the Garfield cartoon where Jon tries to use cash instead of a credit card and everyone freaks out if you want to add humor).
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I think it’s outstanding.
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Are you putting your entire essay up section by section? That’s a really bad idea because different people who answer are going to have different editing styles. I suggest you print the entire thing off and have someone you know look it over for you.
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I don’t think it’s confusing at all. It’s concise and well written.
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If you wrote this speech, it sounds great. What is the age group you will be presenting this to? If it is to age 13 and under, you may want to Spark notes it. Otherwise, keep it as is. You were succinct and to the point. (You could always show the Garfield cartoon where Jon tries to use cash instead of a credit card and everyone freaks out if you want to add humor).
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Hi there, It sounds so good and cool. Be brave. Good luck on it.
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I think it is clear and concise.
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